Monday, March 21, 2016

Slice #21

I peel the orange and take a bite of the sweet, succulent fruit.  I pop a piece into my mouth and take a bite.  The juice explodes in my mouth and dances across my taste buds.  A subtle sour flavor shines through, mixing perfectly with the sugary sweetness.  I take another bite and feel a little bit of the cold juice run down my chin.  It is delicious.

2 comments:

  1. I love oranges too, This is a great way to describe eating one. Nice!

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  2. I enjoy oranges from time to time myself, and I like that you wrote about a specific moment while you were eating. I like the part "The juice dances on my taste buds" because it sets the scene really well.

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